Thursday, October 18, 2012

100 word Challenge

This writing for the 100 word Challenge the writing prompt was what is that.
Droon
“What is that” everyone says. “I don’t know maybe a room should we go inside?” I whispered  “yes”. We entered the lonely room everyone  took their  stuff into the room  I think they want  sleep in here so I did the same.
11:00 we just turned out the light in the little room and closed the door but the room lights up.  I start to tumble down I think I am on a  staircase.  they follow me down.  Me and my friend have entered  a new world called Droon.  I have many questions but the stairs start disappearing.


9 comments:

  1. Amazing Amy,
    It really wants me to read on
    you should do a second one!

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    1. Thanks Sami. I will probably will do a second one. It is based on a book called Droon. http://www.scholastic.com/droon/index.htm

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  2. Very Good Amy! I like how made up a new world it was very descriptive.Well done

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    1. Thanks Tyer. But it is based on a real book called Droon.

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  3. Awesome work you have done so well.

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  4. Awesome Amy I love your writing you have done a great job.

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  5. Cool Amy!
    I like the descriptive words in your story!
    Your adjectives also make it slightly emotional!
    This makes me feel like there is a part 2!
    Will you give us a part 2!

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